{"id":483,"date":"2013-01-31T14:00:32","date_gmt":"2013-01-31T06:00:32","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/benjamincheah.wordpress.com\/?p=483"},"modified":"2013-01-31T14:00:32","modified_gmt":"2013-01-31T06:00:32","slug":"beyond-words-on-paper","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/kitsuncheah.com\/?p=483","title":{"rendered":"Beyond words on paper"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>At the beginning of the year I joined a group with a single aim: In the month of January, produce 50000 words. It&#8217;s like the National Novel Writing Month, but in January instead of November.<\/p>\n<p>Cut to thirty days later.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve completed two novellas. Roughly one week per story. Both are military science fiction, one is probably rougher than the other, but I intend to publish both someday soon. Comes to 42229 words.<\/p>\n<p>In the other two weeks, I was working on a variety of writing related stuff. People who follow The Online Citizen would notice that I was covering rallies, walkabouts and other matters during the Punggol East by-election. I also put together other writing-related stuff, lesson plans and proposals and the like. Total of 13373 words.<\/p>\n<p>Put them all together and you get 55602 words.<\/p>\n<p>Technically, I haven&#8217;t quite met the goal if you count fiction alone. But if there weren&#8217;t a by-election, or if I didn&#8217;t have to write the proposals, I might have met the goal. I do intend to try this again, maybe not for NaNoWriMo, but for some other occasion.<\/p>\n<p>Still. The point of writing this is\u00a0<em>not<\/em> to show off. (Well, not\u00a0<em>just\u00a0<\/em>to show off.) When I was in primary school I wrote a full-fledged novel. 300 A4 pages long. 300 pages of utter rubbish.<\/p>\n<p>And that was the problem. I wrote to meet a self-imposed page count. But little else. Now, a little older and wiser, I wrote to meet other expectations. In both novellas, I didn&#8217;t just put words down for the sake of having words. I tried to put together actual plots, inserted as much craft as I could, and generally tried to capture the experience of warfighting in the future. I&#8217;m not sure how well I did, but it was definitely better than my boyhood attempt.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve long known I could put together novel-length works with enough willpower. But that&#8217;s not enough for me now. If I am to become a successful novellist I need more than words on paper. I&#8217;ll need stories with heart, characters with soul, worlds that stand to scrutiny and words that resonate in the reader&#8217;s soul. And to do this, and more, for the length of my career.<\/p>\n<p>Publishing has changed dramatically, but one thing remains: quality of writing. The only way to improve is to write with an eye towards growth, and that is what I do with every story I write.<\/p>\n<p>To do this,\u00a0I think there are some questions writers should keep in mind when writing. I&#8217;ve outlined them below.<\/p>\n<p>1. What am I trying to accomplish with my story? How does the story meet this?<\/p>\n<p>2. How will my characters, given their background, talk, act, feel and think in this situation?<\/p>\n<p>3. What is the arc of the narrative? How dependent is it on plot holes, out-of-character stupidity and other mistakes?<\/p>\n<p>4. What is the setting like? What is the atmosphere created? How is it relevant to the story? Does it hold up to scrutiny?<\/p>\n<p>5. How do the words I choose contribute to the story? How do they\u00a0<em>not<\/em><em>\u00a0<\/em>contribute? What feelings do they evoke, if at all? What deeper meaning do they evoke, if at all?<\/p>\n<p>6. How do the answers of the above questions serve the story goal outlined in the first question?<\/p>\n<p>These questions are like blueprints. They keep you on track while you&#8217;re building the story. It&#8217;s easy to get lost in the writing and lose sight of the larger goal. The point of writing isn&#8217;t to pad out word counts &#8212; it&#8217;s to communicate. So the story comes first, words just help you get there.<\/p>\n<p>In the stories I&#8217;ve written, I hope to have answered these questions as well as I could. I do my best, and I strive to do better each time.\u00a0And with any luck, it might even pay off one day.<\/p>\n<p>Word counts are good for people who want to keep track of their work. But it&#8217;s not the be-all and end-all of writing. Words are just that: words. They are the building blocks of your story, but too many blocks or too few or putting them in the wrong place makes a building weird. 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